Defining Story
Laura J. Mixon August 5th, 2006
Greetings, all, and thanks to the web hosts and my fellow authors for inviting me to play in this great sandbox. For my first contribution to this forum, here is an essay I recently wrote on the nature of story.
At its simplest, a story can be defined as a character in a setting with a problem. These are story’s subatomic particles, if you will. You’ll find exceptions, as storytelling is a highly subjective and idiosyncratic artform, but stories without a character, a setting, and a problem are about rare as anti-hydrogen.
Good stories both entertain us and have characters whose problems we care about. Great stories linger in our minds long afterward – because they strike a chord that resonates with us. That chord that rings in us when a story moves us — that gut-deep feeling, that “aha!” when we have read or watched something that just feels right somehow — is tied to its theme.
A theme can be expressed by a single sentence — a truism or cliche, even — that summarizes what the story is about. “Love conquers all.” ‘The best laid plans go oft awry.” “You can’t take it with you.” “There ain’t no such thing as a free lunch.” Chris likes to give the example of the Eensy Weensy Spider, a thirty-eight (!) word story whose theme is “Perseverance furthers.” A story whose theme can’t be summarized in a single sentence has no clear theme, and I can pretty much guarantee you that it’s a story that flounders. (Don’t worry if you don’t know your theme when you start out, however; writers often don’t know what it was about till after they’ve finished it…but if you have a completed or mostly completed work, it’s a useful exercise to see if you can work out its theme — or take some of your favorite works, and see if you can boil their themes down to ten words or less.)