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		<title>By: Moodsk</title>
		<link>http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kevinamurphy/craft/great-first-lines#comment-62758</link>
		<dc:creator>Moodsk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Mar 2008 00:13:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Go on</description>
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		<title>By: Faye</title>
		<link>http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kevinamurphy/craft/great-first-lines#comment-45349</link>
		<dc:creator>Faye</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Oct 2007 00:42:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Of course I just had to go look up the first lines of my favorite books.  I won't write them here, but some were catchy and some were just average.  What I realized was the the first line, to me, doesn't matter as much as the first few lines.  I can't just read the first line, I have to keep going, even if it's only through the first 3 lines.  But that also means that the writer as a greater chance to catch me in the opening.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Of course I just had to go look up the first lines of my favorite books.  I won&#8217;t write them here, but some were catchy and some were just average.  What I realized was the the first line, to me, doesn&#8217;t matter as much as the first few lines.  I can&#8217;t just read the first line, I have to keep going, even if it&#8217;s only through the first 3 lines.  But that also means that the writer as a greater chance to catch me in the opening.</p>
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		<title>By: David</title>
		<link>http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kevinamurphy/craft/great-first-lines#comment-7794</link>
		<dc:creator>David</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Dec 2006 07:03:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I happened across this article by linking from an article by linking from an email transcript by linking from a myspace message.  Oi.  Well, here goes:

I always found the most intriguing books were ones that started you in the center of the beginning of the book as the most captivating.  Your reaction is along the lines of "wait... what?" and you are playing catch-up through the first third or so of the story (book, novel, whatever) and by then you are so completely hooked with emotional ties or action that you almost have no choice but to find out what happens through the rest of the piece.  For this reason, my favorite author is William Gibson.

"I put the shotgun in an Adidas bag and padded it out with four pairs of tennis socks, not my style at all, but that was what I was aiming for: If they think you're crude, go technical; if they think you're technical, go crude."

As you may infer from the first line of &lt;em&gt;Johnny Mnemonic &lt;/em&gt;Gibson doesn't like to use introductions- and there is no worry about catching someone on the first paragraph, page or line.  When they read the first word they are already halfway through the story, and Gibson drops bones for his readers throughout the entire story to flesh out not only the characters, but the setting.  If he absolutely must describe a scene it is in two scentences or less, and only sketches it out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I happened across this article by linking from an article by linking from an email transcript by linking from a myspace message.  Oi.  Well, here goes:</p>
<p>I always found the most intriguing books were ones that started you in the center of the beginning of the book as the most captivating.  Your reaction is along the lines of &#8220;wait&#8230; what?&#8221; and you are playing catch-up through the first third or so of the story (book, novel, whatever) and by then you are so completely hooked with emotional ties or action that you almost have no choice but to find out what happens through the rest of the piece.  For this reason, my favorite author is William Gibson.</p>
<p>&#8220;I put the shotgun in an Adidas bag and padded it out with four pairs of tennis socks, not my style at all, but that was what I was aiming for: If they think you&#8217;re crude, go technical; if they think you&#8217;re technical, go crude.&#8221;</p>
<p>As you may infer from the first line of <em>Johnny Mnemonic </em>Gibson doesn&#8217;t like to use introductions- and there is no worry about catching someone on the first paragraph, page or line.  When they read the first word they are already halfway through the story, and Gibson drops bones for his readers throughout the entire story to flesh out not only the characters, but the setting.  If he absolutely must describe a scene it is in two scentences or less, and only sketches it out.</p>
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		<title>By: Erin Underwood</title>
		<link>http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kevinamurphy/craft/great-first-lines#comment-2976</link>
		<dc:creator>Erin Underwood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2006 12:38:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Is there anything that Kevin &lt;em&gt;can't &lt;/em&gt;find online?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Is there anything that Kevin <em>can&#8217;t </em>find online?</p>
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		<title>By: Kevin Andrew Murphy</title>
		<link>http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kevinamurphy/craft/great-first-lines#comment-2969</link>
		<dc:creator>Kevin Andrew Murphy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2006 05:50:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just did a search.  You can find it for sale &lt;a href="http://www.basbleu.com/stores/1/Pride_and_Prejudice_the_Beach_P1914.cfm?SearchTerms=pride+and+prejudice+beach+towel" rel="nofollow"&gt;on this site for only $20&lt;/a&gt;, plus I expect S/H.

I recently saw the Jane Austen action figure.  I was sort of wanting one of those too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just did a search.  You can find it for sale <a href="http://www.basbleu.com/stores/1/Pride_and_Prejudice_the_Beach_P1914.cfm?SearchTerms=pride+and+prejudice+beach+towel" rel="nofollow">on this site for only $20</a>, plus I expect S/H.</p>
<p>I recently saw the Jane Austen action figure.  I was sort of wanting one of those too.</p>
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		<title>By: kateelliott</title>
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		<dc:creator>kateelliott</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 Sep 2006 21:35:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Now I desperately want a beach towel with the first para of P&#38;P printed on it!

Sarah, where did you get it???</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Now I desperately want a beach towel with the first para of P&amp;P printed on it!</p>
<p>Sarah, where did you get it???</p>
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		<title>By: Sara Lipowitz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sara Lipowitz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 Sep 2006 19:01:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>"The unicorn lived in a lilac wood, and she lived all alone."

This scans like poetry. Would it be as good without the "and"? No. Would it be as good broken into two sentences? No.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;The unicorn lived in a lilac wood, and she lived all alone.&#8221;</p>
<p>This scans like poetry. Would it be as good without the &#8220;and&#8221;? No. Would it be as good broken into two sentences? No.</p>
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		<title>By: Erin Underwood</title>
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		<dc:creator>Erin Underwood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Sep 2006 14:24:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Here's one of my recent favorite first lines; it's from &lt;em&gt;Confederacy of Dunces&lt;/em&gt;.

&lt;blockquote&gt;A green hunting cap squeezed the top of the fleshy baloon of a head.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
That one sentence got me to read the paragraph, which got me to read the first chapter, which got me to read the next then the next chapters, etc. It's a strange and great book.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s one of my recent favorite first lines; it&#8217;s from <em>Confederacy of Dunces</em>.</p>
<blockquote><p>A green hunting cap squeezed the top of the fleshy baloon of a head.</p></blockquote>
<p>That one sentence got me to read the paragraph, which got me to read the first chapter, which got me to read the next then the next chapters, etc. It&#8217;s a strange and great book.</p>
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		<title>By: Sarah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Sep 2006 05:52:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When first lines grab me, they grab me. But in many books I love, they just don't. I don't see this as a problem. Anyway, I just had to comment re: Pride and Prejudice-- I must be a huge English nerd, because I actually own the first paragraph on a beach towel.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When first lines grab me, they grab me. But in many books I love, they just don&#8217;t. I don&#8217;t see this as a problem. Anyway, I just had to comment re: Pride and Prejudice&#8211; I must be a huge English nerd, because I actually own the first paragraph on a beach towel.</p>
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		<title>By: Katharine Kerr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Katharine Kerr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Sep 2006 21:43:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Editors will give a novel a couple of pages -- one hopes 10 -- to hook them, Heather.  Don't despair just yet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Editors will give a novel a couple of pages &#8212; one hopes 10 &#8212; to hook them, Heather.  Don&#8217;t despair just yet.</p>
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